ONCE THERE WAS A LITTLE SPONGe BOY HIS NAME WAS BOB WE CALled him spongbob.
{story} "Patrick" KNOCK KNOCK "yes Spongbob" "lets go JELLYFISHING! "ok" said Patrick. ZZZZZZIIIINNNNGGGG "ouch!!' said Spongbob "LET'S GO TO THE HOSPTAL" said Patrick "nah, it is just gushing" said Spongbob. "ok" said Patrick Spongbob turns white. "SPONGEBOB NOOOOOO" "just kidding" said Spongbob. WEE I jump for jelly fish do do do do do do do,Let's go home cause my tummy does not feel so good, Ok said patrick. "Time to end the book" said Spongebob.
You used a lot of dialogue. That is good conversation you got going. I love how Sponge Bob doesn’t even relise how bad it is to be stung and I should know because I’ve gotten stung before.
Hope to see you soon!
-Sophie